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Lesson 7 Assignment 1

Lesson 7 Assignment 1

Q For this assignment, your group will work to craft a 60-second commercial spot utilizing the AIDA format we have been discussing this week in class. The commercial spot should be crafted to sell a product or service that the company your group founded will produce. The actual product is up to your group, but you will need to clearly utilize AIDA in crafting your spot, and 60 seconds is a very short window in which to include all the information. You will need to focus on concision if you are going to fit everything into the spot. Assignment Instructions Submissions will be in the form of a recorded media file through Kultura or an .mp4, etc. that can be accepted by the system. Submissions are limited to 60 seconds in length and going over is not allowed. Instructions for using Kaltura can be found in the Canvas Student Orientation, ELO1000. A link to that course is available to you in the Start Here Module. In addition to the video submission, student groups will craft a one-page explanation of the rhetorical choices made for their commercial. This should cover why they chose specific language, visual rhetoric, music, etc. even if it is not included in the video submission but they wanted to include it and could not. Your rhetorical situation is Commercial (genre), Persuasive (purpose), and Audience (you will determine based on product or service being sold). View Rubric GEB3213 Assignment Rubric GEB3213 Assignment Rubric Criteria Ratings Pts Rhetorical Situation view longer description 25 pts Exemplary The writing engages the correct audience, purpose, and genre for the assignment. It does so through a thoughtful analysis of the prompt and creates an expected document that conforms to genre conventions in style. 21 pts Accomplished The writing engages the correct genre, purpose, and audience. Document only conforms to most of the genre expectations. 17 pts Developing The writing is in the correct genre, but audience or purpose may be incorrect at the outset or fluctuate during the written text. Document conforms to some genre expectations, but not a majority of them. 10 pts Beginning The writing fails to meet the minimum requirements of the assignment. It does not engage the prompt through the correct genre, audience, or purpose. The document produced does not conform to genre expectations. / 25 pts Organization view longer description 25 pts Exemplary The writing flows smoothly and logically. It contains the appropriate organizational style for the assignment and shows evidence of consideration for the audience beyond expectations for level of course. 21 pts Accomplished The writing is organized logically and flows well. The organizational style may shift once in the assignment but the attempt to adhere to one style is clearly identified. Section headings are utilized when appropriate. 17 pts Developing The writing demonstrates some attempts at organization but is not consistent and needed to be revised before submission to adhere to prompt guidelines. Some section headings may be present when appropriate. 10 pts Beginning The writing is noticeably lacking in organization. Paragraphing and/or header sections may not be appropriate. / 25 pts Style view longer description 25 pts Exemplary The writing engages the reader through a prose style appropriate to the assignment. Language is precise. Conforms to the 7 Cs and proper APA style for format and citation (internal and final). 21 pts Accomplished The writing keeps the reader’s attention through a carefully crafted prose style. Language chosen is appropriate to the subject but may need further work on one or two of the 7 Cs. Often conforms to APA format and citation but may have some errors in either. 17 pts Developing The writing is clear but could be expressed in a style more appropriate to the subject. Some specific terms are not explained when necessary. Needs additional work on more than three of the 7 Cs. Adheres to some APA format and citation rules, but the citations and/or format may be incorrect more often than correct. 10 pts Beginning The writing lacks clarity and is sometimes confusing. The language chosen is not appropriate to the subject nor the assignment. Needs additional work in nearly all categories of the 7 Cs of communication as defined in the course. No evidence of attempt at engaging APA format or citation in the document. / 25 pts Mechanics view longer description 25 pts Exemplary The writing contains sentences that are nearly always complete and grammatically correct, and free of confusion and ambiguity. 21 pts Accomplished The writing contains sentences that are incomplete, or which imply unstated connections and/or conclusions. The writing may exhibit a few patterns of error, but understanding is not impeded. 17 pts Developing The writing contains some patterns of error, but the reader can understand the meaning of the sentence with some effort. There is some evidence of proofreading, editing, or rewriting. 10 pts Beginning The writing contains multiple patterns of error, and the reader cannot understand the meaning of the sentence. There is no evidence of proofreading, editing, or rewriting. / 25 pts Total Points: 0

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Lesson 07- Group Assignment The product we have chosen is the AI and Natural Process of the Patient Engagement Information. The name of the product is NLP-AI has been discussed in the video. For making this commercial, we have decided to put as many information as possible followed the graphic visuals. This computational technology is new to the people who are not aware of this process. The tone of the commercial has been kept serious and formal throughout with the vibrant colors using in the background. The commercial starts with what is NLP? The time limit is another concern that we have to keep in mind. How the technology has transformed the whole process has been explained through the visuals. The process of speaking and managing the visuals accordingly has not been possible because of the time crunch.